Cindy Wider   Comment Posted Nov.5th, 2009, viewed 9 times

Hi Anar, this is beautiful work here! I can clearly see all of the different pencil strokes and you have certainly achieved a nice dark tone in the shed roof area. It would have been great to see some more of that dark tone inside the shed ie: on the back wall too. your shading inthe barels looks good. Your chisel point strokes are a little bit thin on the bases but looking like a chisel point stroke.

In the tree tops the tiny chisel point strokes needed a wee bit larger (wider) base. the bush looks effective, a good bush-like texture and if you added a few little random leaves (strokes with your cotton bud and graphite) it would look even more realistic. The shading in your tree trunks is good and the broad strokes on the shed roof are also effective. Great work here all in all.