tannis
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Posted Dec.27th, 2012, viewed 702 times
Hello Ray this is fantastic work! Your ellipses are very, very good, it takes quite a bit of practice to draw them well:) You’ve done a good job of opening the mouth up and then rising up on a gentle slope. I’ve used my technical tool to draw your lines to show where slight adjustments could be made. At the letter A the ellipse comes out too a bit too far or not far enough on that side. You just needed to measure carefully so that the horizontal line is positioned exactly in the middle of the vertical line. There should be the same amount of distance on either side. Excellent work overall!
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