Mike Sibley   Comment Posted Oct.20th, 2010, viewed 30 times

Not obnoxious at all! I don't know - I simplify it for you and you complicate it again :o)

Thanks for your advice - I adjusted your scan before critiquing.

There's some real understanding of the three-dimensional forms in this, lovely smooth application and blending, a good use of cast shadows (negating the use of dividing lines), a dark throat that increases the intensity of your highlights, and I think you've done very well.